Friday, April 15, 2011

Essay 3 Workshop

What role does forgiveness play in Smoke Signals
In the movie “Smoke Signals,” forgiveness plays a major role in the theme of this movie. The 
very end of the movie I think contains one of the most insightful statements about the nature of 
forgiveness. It’s a move based on family and brokenness and how even anger, alcoholism, and 
hurt still can’t compare with love. It can’t compete. True and unconditional love cannot be 
defeated. I think the overall reflection of forgiveness in this move moves on toward the personal 
areas along with larger political and social areas. 
When Victor is told that this father has died in Arizona, he and Thomas have to make the long 
journey by bus and on foot to go and get his father’s truck and personal belongings. During this 
trip Victor and Thomas learn a lot about each other and more about Victor’s father, not only the 
demons he battled, but also about the love that he had for his son. At one point during the end of 
the movie Thomas asks Victor, “So why did you dad leave?” and Victor replies, “He didn’t mean 
to Thomas.” And the Victor begins to do what he was to do to grieve his father’s death and ask 
the question about forgiveness. The movie addresses the important questions of why we hurt the 
people we love and if we can or should be forgiven? 
The move begins with fire and flames and ends with the waterfalls over the bridge. I this 
symbolizes forgiveness. You see fire and flames which can relate to hurt and anger and then you 
see the beautiful waterfalls which could be symbolizing the cleanliness and washing away of all 
the anger and hurt and alcoholism and brokenness that seems to be all through out this movie. 
It’s sort of similar to the washing away of all the bad and showing something beautiful, like 
forgiveness. 
This movie I think explores forgiveness between family members and also in cultural and 
historical areas as well. For example, how could a race of native people forgive generations of 
the stereotyping and for allowing their family and grandparents to allow it happen if you think 
about it in such a way it can go in either direction. It’s difficult to contemplate forgiveness when 
you’re paralyzed by fear. Going a little off subject I believe that we are not to pass judgement on 
our bothers and sisters (referring to other human beings) and to “forgive our brothers and sisters 
from our hearts” (Matthew 18:21). So a lot of people may ask the questions in a society based 
forgiveness that can be illustrated in this movie about forgiving terrorists, rapists and murderers, 
liars, thieves, people along these lines. For some people forgiveness is not always an easy thing 
especially depending on the actions a person has made. Again, for example, people who abuse 
and mistreat children or alcoholics who refuse to recognize the damage they cause to their 
families, those who participate in rape and molestation and things like that destroy trust and love 
aren’t really helped when forgiveness comes easily with no consequences for their actions 
especially when actions such as these are continually repeated. 
I think a question this movie brings about is how do we see to get past our pain and hurt, fear and 
wounds, and realize that to be forgiven we must forgive others. Although the movie did clearly 
state the fact about forgiving our fathers, which is forgiving others it also throws out when is it 
necessary to seek forgiveness ourselves and not only in family or other people. I think mostly 
everyone can recall a time in their lives where their own parents, neighbors, family members, 
friends, somebody has a story with hurt and pain somewhere for whatever reason, could be 
regrets, lessons to be learned, rejection, things that meant great value to us that were taken or 
maybe given away, words that were said to us, sometimes not meaning anything to someone else 
but so powerful in our ears and has in some way determined the course of our lives whether it’s 
the fact that you’ve gotten past these things and decided to be something bigger or you’re still 
hurt and in fear because of these things as so you’re not living up to your full potential. I think 
forgiveness has a lot to do with everything here and the movie explains it very well. 
In the last line in the movie it says “If we forgive our fathers, what is left?” After we forgive 
someone who has repeatedly and deeply hurt us, what’s left? What is forgiveness going to do for 
us, is it going to cause us to come to terms with ourselves. How does the act of forgiveness 
cleanse and transform us? These are things I believe are being asked. And I think that when we 
forgive others, we can forgive ourselves. When we forgive people who hurt us we can say to 
ourselves, I’m bigger than this and I’m not going to let it affect my life because in reality, hurt 
people hurt people. And because Victor was so hurt, he put his anger and pain on other people 
like his mother and Thomas and his father. And when he’s willing and able to forgive, the pain 
that was once inside has now vanished and he can no longer continue hurting other people.
So the movie “Smoke Signals” really does bring about a lot more then just the act of forgiveness 
but in different realms, personal, political and social and why forgiveness is so crucial to our 
lives and what it can really do when we choose to face the acts of forgiveness. 

3 comments:

  1. I loved your third paragraph, it has a lot of emotion and clearly explains forgiveness. I am not very sure which sentence of the introduction is your thesis but I personally liked this one "True and unconditional love cannot be
    defeated". Your conclusion needs more work but it is a great start. there are some really great ideas in your body paragraphs, just work on developing them more and try to support the thesis with them.
    This is a great rough draft I really enjoyed reading it.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Natalia

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  2. I thought this draft was excellent! Your thesis was great. Your critical thinking was wonderful, and it was an all around great paper to read! I really like the fact that you included a verse from the bible in your paper. Most people wouldn't think to do that because its politically incorrect or what not but I enjoyed the verse from Matthew 18:21. The only thing I would say you need to work on would be your conclusion. It is quite short and could possibly be lengthen some what. Other than that your draft is on its way to becoming an excellent paper!!
    Jarrod

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  3. HI Haliey-

    great essay. it was nice to read about something different, since i wrote about another topic, reading yours was nice, i love your intro and like Natalia said your 3rd paragraph, you seem passionate about what you wrote, and I think that is one of the main reasons that it kept me so interested!! I dont think that you need any revising! good job!

    1. What is the writer’s thesis? Can you find the statement? Is it the main point the rest of the essay works to develop?

    2. What evidence is cited to prove and support the writer’s thesis? What pieces of evidence are cited from the readings and/or the writer’s observations to support the thesis?

    3. Is the writer’s reasoning/critical thinking provided to explain how the evidence proves and supports the thesis? Yes, I think that you have a great essay here and that it does not need to really be revised, its strong has support from movie and your blend it in with your own opinion.
    your thesis is strong and flows throughout your essay.
    4. What else could the writer cite as evidence in this essay?

    6. What’s strong about the essay? I think that personal opinion is very strong in the essay and you show great supportive evidence in your essay, which kept me interested!

    7. What other suggestions or feedback do you want to provide the writer?

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